tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3346132853418226175.post1246160851856320261..comments2013-06-06T10:45:58.873-07:00Comments on Coup d'East: Revisiting the pastAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08529998530980874003noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3346132853418226175.post-67008045793823848062013-06-06T10:45:58.873-07:002013-06-06T10:45:58.873-07:00HI, KCS, I like your story, the narration progress...HI, KCS, I like your story, the narration progresses in a smooth flow and then ends up in the past. The reader gets a nice feel of the past too and need not to say that the concluding message is very interesting.<br />So your story is based on a theme; please show that too, so that the reader can easily connect it with the story. Prasanna Raghavanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15639197236363469260noreply@blogger.com